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I love it! It sounds like old times when there were dwarfs and druids and knights and fairies in the world!

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I think they’re still around but just hiding. ;) Thanks, Amanda.

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“youthful laughter skipping down the lonesome river on a gentle and vanishing autumn breeze“. I love it Ryan! Also, I ordered a copy of the book “the man who wasn’t there”. The human sense of self is intriguing to me. I always look forward to reading your next writing. ✌️

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Thanks, Jean! Sometimes you have to write an entire piece to get to the one really good line. I hope you enjoy Ananthaswamy's book. It's a fascinating topic and he write well.

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I love the story, you should have just kept on writing ,and turned it into a book ..

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I may yet do that. Had to stop to mow the lawn again. ;)

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such an evocative scene. i'd love to read more of this bittersweet story if you decide to explore further! i'm already intrigued by the prologue...

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I’d like to know about his life now as well. May explore further. Perhaps start with an object sacred to him beyond the tree. ;)

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yes! :-) now i'm curious what that might be...

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Charming. wistful tale!

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Thanks, Myrna.

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This gave me shivers. I could feel myself in the scene. The sylvan glen invokes such a clear image for me. I almost wish we were staying in Washington on the off-chance of meeting you. Perhaps you’ll have a book signing in Arizona in the future !

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Very kind of you, Susan. Thanks. I hope to meet you, too. Whereabouts are you in Arizona? I hope a signing does bring me around.

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We currently live in Silverdale but moving into our new home in Arizona (about an hour south of Tucson) at the end of June. I will look forward to meeting you, too!

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🥺

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Love this. I want as eloquent as you someday.

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Thanks, Deanne. I appreciate the comment. ;)

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It would help if I would have written it correctly. It should say I want to write as eloquently as you someday. Thanks

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I understood it perfectly. Typing comments is like chatting not writing.

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Evocative piece. Had to look up definition of 'wintles'.

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Thanks, Mom. Stumbled on 'wintle' reading a Burns poem ("Halloween," I think) on a Scotland trip and had to look it up, too. Hope you're having a lovely summer in California. It just hit here.

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