Captions, how do I hate thee? (Plural of thee is … I dunno.). Captions for anything audible ruin the experience. No level of greatness in the visual product can overcome their taint.
The lady appearing out of the clouds so effectively wielding her head-severing axe is like a dream come true. Only thing I'd change is the red cloak: She should have it.
fantastic advice, especially the part about experience. some things just can't be found in books. and that bit of dialogue is priceless :-) also, your story is too good not to continue...
Yes, it was a long post, but I really enjoyed reading your thoughts on writing.
I loved the workers chatting. I do that. Not intentionally, but people like to talk, and I like to listen. So when I'm out and about, I just listen to the chatter around me. I also like to watch the WAY people say stuff. How most people can't go two seconds without touching their face or making audible sounds that have no exact spellings. I wish there were more ways to write "scoffed" without sounding mean.
My two bits: When I watch great shows like "Better Call Saul" (man, that team can write), I always leave on the closed captioning. I love reading all the ways the screen writers describe sounds. From insects chirruping to characters scoffing, I find that reading dialog on a TV show reveals how most people talk in short bursts and many other surrounding sounds that we might forget to include in our writing like an engine starts, a dog barks in the distance... :)
Also, while a bit macabre, the short story you wrote was very interesting. What a great exercise!
Thanks, Carmen. I somehow knew you'd read and find something to appreciate in this one. I like the idea of turning on the captions when watching TV. And yes, "Better Call Saul" is great writing.
Captions, how do I hate thee? (Plural of thee is … I dunno.). Captions for anything audible ruin the experience. No level of greatness in the visual product can overcome their taint.
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Enjoyable and informative. Seems being a writer involves more than writing and less than performing, yet equal commitment.
Yes! Toss in a little self-loathing and grandiosity and you're there. ;)
The lady appearing out of the clouds so effectively wielding her head-severing axe is like a dream come true. Only thing I'd change is the red cloak: She should have it.
I think you're probably right. If I decide to work on it further, I'll give it to her.
fantastic advice, especially the part about experience. some things just can't be found in books. and that bit of dialogue is priceless :-) also, your story is too good not to continue...
Thanks, J.M. It's not a genre I normally write in, but may pursue it a bit for fun.
You're always so inspirational.
Yes, it was a long post, but I really enjoyed reading your thoughts on writing.
I loved the workers chatting. I do that. Not intentionally, but people like to talk, and I like to listen. So when I'm out and about, I just listen to the chatter around me. I also like to watch the WAY people say stuff. How most people can't go two seconds without touching their face or making audible sounds that have no exact spellings. I wish there were more ways to write "scoffed" without sounding mean.
My two bits: When I watch great shows like "Better Call Saul" (man, that team can write), I always leave on the closed captioning. I love reading all the ways the screen writers describe sounds. From insects chirruping to characters scoffing, I find that reading dialog on a TV show reveals how most people talk in short bursts and many other surrounding sounds that we might forget to include in our writing like an engine starts, a dog barks in the distance... :)
Also, while a bit macabre, the short story you wrote was very interesting. What a great exercise!
Keep sharing, and I'll keep reading!
Carmen
Thanks, Carmen. I somehow knew you'd read and find something to appreciate in this one. I like the idea of turning on the captions when watching TV. And yes, "Better Call Saul" is great writing.